By Freddie Coudret
Protesting
in the National Football League (NFL) has been an extremely polarizing subject ever
since Colin Kaepernick and Eric Reid of the San Francisco 49ers first took a
knee during the national anthem on September 1st, 2017. Kaepernick responded
to criticism by revealing that his reasoning for kneeling during the anthem was
to shine a light on police brutality against minorities and social inequality. When
I stated that this has been a polarizing issue since its inception- I meant it.
People from all walks of life; sports fans, people who have never watched a game
of football in their lives, white people, black people, and President Trump
have all put their two cents in about the issue.
As a result, the NFL began working on a new rule that
would require all players to stand on the field for the anthem, the alternative
being a fine. Owners around the NFL, mostly older, white men, quickly voted to
pass the rule in May. The rule was to be enforced beginning in the 2018-2019
season. However, back in July, the NFL player’s union filed a grievance to the
NFL refuting this rule. In response, the NFL decided to table discussion of the
new anthem policy for players, stating that the issue would be resolved later.
A fact that seems all too obvious these days, President
Trump has been very vocal about the protests since the beginning, all the way
through the tabling of the rule. The day that the players’ union filed a
grievance, Trump tweeted, “The NFL national anthem debate is alive and well
again - can't believe it. Isn't it in contract that players must stand at
attention, hand on heart? The $40 million commissioner, meaning Roger Goodell,
must now make a stand - first time kneeling, out for game; second time
kneeling, out for season, no pay,” (Garcia-Navarro & Davis, 2018). It is easy
to take a few quick minutes out of your day to search “NFL anthem rule,” or “NFL
anthem protest,” and you’ll find hundreds of results. It ranges from major news
outlets tweeting out articles about the NFL’s struggle to find a rule that can bridge
the divide between everyone, celebrities and politicians weighing in on the
situation, and the average American stating their opinion. Twitter is the most
useful social media outlet in terms of a movement such as the one we see almost
every Thursday, Sunday, and Monday nights. Major news outlets, more specifically
sports media, tweet out articles for their masses of followers to see. In
addition, these followers, average Americans, are very engrossed in
professional football while it’s in-season. Football is what us Americans watch
and talk about. When we see the protests happening right in front of us on live
television and read about many celebrities and politicians responding to the
protests in real time, the “tweets and the streets,” (Kidd, 2018), to pin a
name to a two-faceted movement that is present in real-life and a presence on Twitter-
is happening in real time. This simple act of kneeling during the national
anthem, bravely started by Colin Kaepernick (whom has since been unofficially
banned from the league for his actions, meaning he is doing something right),
has multiplied in attention and effectiveness due to social media.
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References
Garcia-Navarro, L., & Davis, W.
(2018, May 27). How The NFL's New Rule On Protesting Is Being Perceived By
Players. Retrieved from https://www.npr.org/2018/05/27/614810127/the-nfls-rule-new-on-kneeling
Kidd,
Dustin. (2017). Social Media Freaks: Digital
identity in the network society. Boulder, CO.: Westview Press.
Freddie,
ReplyDeleteIn terms of formatting, this is a vast improvement. Nonetheless, your post still doesn't conform to our "house style." Issues with spacing and far too much white space between the end of your post and your reference list further undermine this effort.
Please review this document carefully and make certain your team members review your post as well.
More substantively, I don't see an "outside" academic source here. As mentioned several times, you are welcome to use our textbooks, but you must make use of at least one academic paper, article or book chapter you've found on your own.
Likewise, your citation for the NPR story is incomplete. And there's no real need to cite this story if you don't mention the source in your essay. Simply cite POTUS tweet and leave it at that.
A few other issues to consider. First, check you use of the semi-colon toward the end of the first paragraph. Second, check your use of pronouns. You write, "What us Americans do..." That should be, "What we Americans do." Again, closer proof reading on your part and quality control from your group helps avoid these errors.
In sum, this is a timely and relevant post. Still, you would do well to follow directions more closely, proof read your work, and focus your remarks more squarely on the role that (social) media plays in this ongoing struggle between players, owners, and politicians.
PS. As I recall, the initial NFL policy gave players another option: remain off the field while the anthem plays.
22/30 pts.